There once was these two best friends named Billy and James they lived in East Orange New Jersey. They were at least 1 years old when they first met, they use to stay together. But as they got older they grew apart. They stop talking when they were about 14 , because Billy moved to New York. After that they Just stopped talking.
About three years later they met at a college . They started talking about all the old times they used to have together while they was waiting to get interviewed. The next day they chilled at Matty's house and stayed for dinner, they did chill like that since they were young. So as they were all in the living room talking laughing and just getting turned up , Billy got a little to drunk and wanted to fight James for no reason at all. James said to Billy , yo chill out bro your a little to drunk. Billy said , don't you tell me what to do . Billy took his shit off and jumped from the couch to the kitchen and just kept running around the house. James chased Billy as he was running, then punched him in the face , Billy fell to the ground , everything got quiet.
About 30 minutes later Matty walked in to the kitchen and saw Billy on the floor , blood dripping from his face like water on a rainy day. Matty took Billy to the hospital but it was kind of hard for Matty to take Billy cause he could barely walk. Minutes later they both got to the hospital luckly a nerse saw how bad Billy was bleeding. She laid Billy on top of the stretcher and pushed Billy to the emergency room , Matty followed. When the got there the nerse told Matty too sit in the waiting room. Matty sat down put head phones on and waited.
Before Matty new Billy was fixed up and ready to go , then they left. When they got out side Billy asked what happen to me , Matty said James knocked you out , Billy said he did , Matty responded yup in one punch. Billy looked as though he was getting mad. He said I'm never talking that dirty retard again.
Its been about a month now and Billy and James sill not talking. Matty decides to call up her uncle because he's very good with fixing problems. Matty got her uncle to come all the way from Mexico just fix a friendship. Matty called up James and Billy and told them to come to her house Friday 5:00. But Neither of them new they was gone be at the same place. Matty's uncle came that Friday morning. She made him a big breakfast because he's doing all this for her. 5:00 is now here, James go there about 5:03 10 minutes later Billy came. When he stepped in the house he looked at James and said WTF are you doing here , James said you not talking to me. Before they could say another word Matty's unlce said now yall knew each other for a long time why argue? Matty said yea why? James and Billy had no words at all. so he said now the both of you sit down and just think. They both sat down, then he said now why are you guys not friends anymore, James said well im not gone lie i punched Billy in the face because he was acting stupid , Matty's uncle said now ask your self is that smart? James said no it wasn't at all.
James said to Billy im sorry, what i did was wrong, your my best friend and we've been threw too much to end our friendship now. Matty's uncle said now see i knew you guys wasn't going to stay mad , best friends don't stay mad
76% the conflict and characters need more development/ it is unclear why the characters do the things that they do.
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